September 1, 2010
~Welcome~
Welcome to my school blog. I'm Janice Hui, and I am a year 9 student. I'm not good at english, cantonese is my mother-tongue. I created this educational blog to share information with everyone and to tell my learning process throughout the year. I hope my information would help. If I maintain it throughout the future, a lot of my work would be in the blog, which will make it a successful blog full of information, and I can look back to what I've done throughout secondary school. Information would be increase, bits by bits, and finally gathered up which make a bunch of knowledge posted into the blog. Information would be updated once I have more to share with. You're welcome to stay in my blog and spend time commenting on it!
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Janice, can you tell your readers why you created this blog, and what you think you might learn by maintaining it over a number of years of your education? Just be careful when writing not to repeat the same word over and over. In this case you have used blog three times in 2 sentences. Your writing will flow better if you can avoid such repitition.
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